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Claire reviews LOM. « Thread Started on Dec 30, 2008, 3:31pm »
I usually hate fanfics. Sonic fanfic, I mean. Ad LOM's as generic as it gets - but god bless you Cyan - you've made it so original. You must TEECH MEE in YOUR WAYZ OF STORYTELLINGZ.
-cough-
Anyway.
Upon reading the description for LOM, my reaction was "Three humans who go to Mobius? .. oh jeeze. -Kyon facepalm-" - But by the end of book one I was gripped, and I'm not drawn into books easily.
I honestly think if you removed the Sonic material, you could publish LOM. I really think that.
My only "-cringe!-" moment was Sally walking out on the Freedom Fighters. I just.. don't see her doing that, I'm sorry. XD; But that's my opinion.
Anyway - LOM's a great read. It's emotional, it's fun and most of all, it's original. And in the fanfic world these days, that's damn hard to do.
« Last Edit: Dec 30, 2008, 3:32pm by Puppet Claire »
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Re: Claire reviews LOM. « Reply #1 on Dec 30, 2008, 4:58pm »
Yeah, that whole thing with Sally was really a mess... Now that I look back, I could arranged something WAY better. And made it more tasteful too. Those were back in the days where I was more uber fangirl, and not-so-great at writing yet.
But I'm glad that you gave LoM a chance, even though you usually hate Sonic fanfics. And I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much for your review!
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